“You don’t get frosts anymore, not real frosts, not here,”
I looked up from my book, surprised at being addressed. The speaker was sitting opposite me and I
hadn’t noticed him arrive, he must have got on at the previous station I
suppose.
“Frosts?”
“Your book, Frost.
Just saying you don’t get frosts these days.”
He was an old man, small, tidy looking, with pure white hair
and a neat beard, he wore an old but dark suit beneath a thick winter
jacket. His smile had the mischief of a
kitten looking at a precious vase.
“It’s not about weather,” I said holding the book up, “It’s
poetry. Robert Frost.”
His smile widened.
“You don’t get real poets any more either,” he said, “I
remember poets that could charm summer out of snow, and lightning from a clear
sky. Babies into cribs too, most of
them. What’s this fellow like then?”
“He’s good,” I said, “I like his work.” It had been a long day and I didn’t feel up
to a conversation anyway. Work had
dragged eight hours into twice that and this train had been diverted so far
from its usual route I’d be lucky to see my home before midnight.
“Like his work? A
poet’s words should stab you to the heart with florid flame and turn your world
to ash in an instant, hah yes, and then build a new and better world an instant
later that makes you wonder how you ever bore the last one.”
That was quite an expectation, and I said so.
“Guilty as charged,” replied this exuberant fellow, “and
unapologetic. Words are too wonderful
a thing to expect anything but magnificence from them. So what did this Frost fellow write that was
so good? Do tell me, I adore being
proven wrong, it has an enjoyable rarity value about it.”
I couldn’t help but smile in response to his unabashed
impudence. I flicked through the book
to find my favourite quotation.
“Here,” I said, and quoted, “I would have written of me on my stone: I had a lover’s quarrel with the world. And it is, you know, it was used as his epitaph.”
“Here,” I said, and quoted, “I would have written of me on my stone: I had a lover’s quarrel with the world. And it is, you know, it was used as his epitaph.”
The old man considered this.
“A lover’s quarrel with the world,” he said, musing and
stroking his beard, “A fine phrase, but maudlin perhaps. I’ve never really understood lovers
quarrelling. I’m more the one night
stand sort myself.” He chuckled at some
hidden joke of his own.
“New lovers are easier to find than new worlds,” I replied,
nettled at his dismissal of my favourite quotation.
“Now what makes you think that?” he said leaning forward and
pressing something into my hand. A
movement at my elbow distracted me, a flutter of wings and an impression of
something large and tattered. When I
looked back the old man was gone, utterly gone, and a ring of ancient gold lay
in my palm shining with truth and the burning cold of ancient winters.
A response to a prompt from Write on Edge using the Robert Frost quotation mentioned in the text
Glad to see you around the link up, Thomas. I do love this one. Many of Frost's haunts were within a stone's throw of where I went to college. He's part of the fabric of New England, and I think people don't even realize it.
ReplyDeleteI love your mysterious train-mate. Got a little thrill of the Other there at the end. :)
I'm so glad you did - thanks for letting me know :D
DeleteI love this. My favorite Frost poem is Bond and Free
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it - thank you
DeleteI couldn't pass up a post with "train" in the title, and I'm glad I didn't. I enjoyed the odd stranger's persistence, and the quote was perfect. The ending left me with questions, which is always fun. Well-crafted and efficiently-written.
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciated Joe - I shall include "train" in every title from now on just to lure you in.
DeleteTerrific! Southern Rail, was it, with all the diversions? This was really good. Not a word wasted :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Asproulla, glad you liked it
DeleteYes to witty and fun! I've definitely had those days, and those train rides, so you sucked me quickly in. I loved your old gentleman and he stayed in character all the way through, so that I very much did a little gasp-thing at the end. It was perfect.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked him - he is a mischievous but strangely compelling fellow as you may come to know.
DeleteAha! Be wary of Strangers bearing quests. There are so many different directions this can go, and I am sure that you will choose the road less traveled, and the story will be perfect!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it - much appreciated
DeleteMy God - that was enjoyable. A "read it twice" sort of enjoyable!
ReplyDeleteThanks Troy - I couldn't ask for more
DeleteWow! Amazing flow and superb dialogues. Loved the mysterious old man, indeed he proved that new worlds aren't so hard to find. Well written!
ReplyDelete-Tinkerbelle
All you need to do is know where to look. Glad you liked it.
DeleteLoved the flow of words, and the dialogues were superb. The mysterious old man sounds very interesting, indeed he proved that finding new worlds is not all that hard.
ReplyDelete-Tinkerbelle
Wow!What a fab and fascinating piece-imagine having a tete-a tete with Frost about his work-am blown away by this Thomas:-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, glad you liked it.
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