Picture by Aesop Clerk |
The elders of the Last Human Settlement had strict rules. Only children could draw water. It was safer. But Sarah’s sister had drawn water too often, and now she was gone.
Sarah filled the containers and mourned her sister. For a moment only she glimpsed a smiling youth fetching water on the far side of the pool, Outside. Handsome…
No. She imagined it.
Perhaps she would imagine it again tomorrow, she hoped.
Prompt from Light and Shade Challenge using the image above, and Studio30Plus using the phrase "Peel away the layers"
Was it a vision, or was the Last Human Settlement not actually the Last Human Settlement? Intriguing as ever Lyssa M x
ReplyDeleteThat would be an interesting twist indeed.
DeleteTemptation can be powerful and lure you away. She had best not go back there, methinks.
ReplyDeleteAh but who would fetch the water then?
DeleteHats off for a very unique take. :-)
ReplyDelete*bows
DeleteThank you
oh the lure of "handsome". This was rich with possibility and intrigue.
ReplyDeleteSuch a good lure indeed - glad you liked it.
DeleteThis was beautifully poetic and haunting.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tara
DeleteI love the way you've managed to create a whole world here with so few words and leave the story open at the end for the reader's imagination. Very intriguing use of the prompt. Bravo, Thomas. Mine's coming on Monday. Hope you'll stop by then.
ReplyDeleteI certainly will - thanks for the feedback
DeleteNice. It has a dystopian feel to it.
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear it - thanks!
DeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDelete