(A response to a prompt from Light and Shade Challenge - inspired by the phrase "Optimism is like a spiritual magnet")
The young man would die unless he received aid, that was
clear. Nobody was more surprised than
him.
“Can’t be killed,” he said, almost petulant as he lay there
doubled over in the moss, “Prophesy.
When I was a child.”
“Aye, well,” Lucas crouched down, stroked sweat-slick hair
from the youth’s forehead, “maybe the Hive didn’t know about that, eh? Typical of them. Never do their research.”
The Scotsman’s weak jest drew a grin from the pained face of
the other.
“We’ve changed context,” the youth said, only now taking in the
scene. Tall old trees and thick undergrowth,
a sky of deep blue. Moments ago it had
been night, with steel and concrete towers twisting in anguish through the
blazing sky, sirens howling from all directions.
“We have. No drones
here, we can rest. Well you can rest
anyway, lie there till help turns up.”
“Is help coming?”
There was sudden hope in the young man’s voice.
“Someone’ll turn up,”
The youth laughed, then winced, clutching at the wound in
his side, a spreading continent of dark inevitability on his tunic. “Never… never figured you for an optimist
Lucas.”
“Optimist?” Lucas
spat the word. “Me?”
“Expecting help to arrive.
Optimist. Glass half full, that’s
you, secretly, that’s you. You think the
glass is half full.”
“Oh aye,” sarcasm sizzled in that syllable, “Optimist thinks
the glass is half full, pessimist thinks it’s half empty, right? Well I’m a realist.” He paused for effect. “The glass is entirely full. The top half’s full of air, the bottom half’s
full of whisky. Not empty at all. And don’t tell me air’s not important or I’ll
prove you wrong.”
The young man smiled at the familiar chiding. “Why whisky?” he asked.
Lucas shrugged. “Why
not? Anyway lie still. Help will be along shortly.” He stood up and walked a little way, toward
the rough track that snaked through the woodland. He ignored the mocking cry of “optimist”
that followed him.
Lucas could already see the horsemen approaching, just as he’d
expected. Half a dozen mounted men on
barrel chested dark steeds. As they
drew closer he saw the lofted banner with the scarlet hunting dog on the sable
field, and thrust his hands into his pockets and waited.
The leader of the horsemen drew to a halt by him and looked
down, raising his hand to the visor of his half helm and raising it. The face beneath was cruel and carved from
stone and war.
“You,” the warrior said.
“Incisive as always,” said Lucas.
“You know the king’s edict.
It’s death for you to return here.”
Lucas shrugged. “There’s
a warrior back there with a stomach wound.
Do you still have that senile old healer at the castle. Aye, good.
Well he’s a bloody genius. See
to my friend and I won’t even resist arrest, how’s that.”
“Resist?” the mounted man said, “You, alone? Against six armed knights?”
Lucas just smiled until the other man nodded once.
Optimism.
Elegant as always - and it's great to see Lucas again Lyssa M
ReplyDeleteI do enjoy when he turns up :D
DeleteThanks for the feedback
'a spreading continent of dark inevitability'; brilliant :)
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciated - glad you liked it
DeleteWonderful job Thomas. Very enjoyable. Loved the bit about the glass being entirely full.
ReplyDeleteThanks Ashley - glad you liked it
DeleteVery well crafted.
ReplyDeleteMuch appreciated
DeleteHa, I had already copied this line: a spreading continent of dark inevitability on his tunic. to tell you how fantastic it was, and apparently I'm not the only one who enjoyed that turn of phrase. Excellent story, I really enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Shannon - I like to hear which bits work, so I appreciate the feedback.
DeleteWhat a wonderful story. It makes me want to start at the beginning, and not stop reading until I reach the end. I truly loved this.
ReplyDeleteGod bless you,
Cheryl