tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post706283993450832593..comments2023-08-08T09:22:07.957+01:00Comments on Marlowe Manor: ReversalAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-43508638441468419582013-03-23T12:58:24.773+00:002013-03-23T12:58:24.773+00:00I can't ask for a better review than that :D ...I can't ask for a better review than that :D Thank youAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-63834422144431933382013-03-22T21:37:38.001+00:002013-03-22T21:37:38.001+00:00Absolutely loved this.Absolutely loved this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-76802470365336865602013-03-22T13:33:55.870+00:002013-03-22T13:33:55.870+00:00Thanks for the kind words, I'm very glad you l...Thanks for the kind words, I'm very glad you liked it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-21851442280680066202013-03-22T12:05:59.368+00:002013-03-22T12:05:59.368+00:00Like this! The mood was perfect, and Eurydice...p...Like this! The mood was perfect, and Eurydice...priceless.Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-75136672223097401082013-03-22T09:46:06.674+00:002013-03-22T09:46:06.674+00:00Thanks for commenting - glad you liked the ideaThanks for commenting - glad you liked the ideaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-163749627040708292013-03-22T02:04:10.351+00:002013-03-22T02:04:10.351+00:00Nice!
I love when I don't see the conceit com...Nice!<br /><br />I love when I don't see the conceit coming.Cameronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05407917830307384493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-7235691627205401672013-03-21T15:07:13.732+00:002013-03-21T15:07:13.732+00:00Thanks for the feedback, glad the idea of the bar ...Thanks for the feedback, glad the idea of the bar came across as I intended. You may be right about the pun... it made me chuckle as I wrote it but the story grew with a different feel as I wrote it.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-37002722069597252562013-03-21T13:48:04.046+00:002013-03-21T13:48:04.046+00:00Well done!
You really craft the idea of a "...Well done! <br /><br />You really craft the idea of a "holding place" with this piece, all of the people just sitting and drinking and existing in his or her own bubble of escape.<br /><br />I would take out the (Siriusly) pun. I don't feel like it fits into the tone of the story, to be honest.angelahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14974137283220034062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-86773374601767537192013-03-20T10:59:40.864+00:002013-03-20T10:59:40.864+00:00Glad you liked it - and thanks for the advice, I s...Glad you liked it - and thanks for the advice, I shall follow it... certainly.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-15887141428925734682013-03-20T10:05:49.911+00:002013-03-20T10:05:49.911+00:00And when he's gripped the porcelain in the mor...And when he's gripped the porcelain in the morning, The God of Drunken Debauchery will have him spilling his insides...<br /><br />I love how you wove this together. My only suggestion would be to watch your -ly adverbs. There's nothing wrong with them, but in large number they can detract from your story instead of add to it. <br /><br />Well done!Shelton Keys Dunninghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10551666631783476472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-63160680655515531392013-03-20T00:13:38.002+00:002013-03-20T00:13:38.002+00:00Indeed so - let's hope things work out better ...Indeed so - let's hope things work out better this way round. Thanks for commenting.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-21512595389423048362013-03-19T20:51:37.892+00:002013-03-19T20:51:37.892+00:00nice mythical touch - it seems the tides are turne...nice mythical touch - it seems the tides are turned and he's following her from the upper world now. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-58722778249271704472013-03-19T20:27:48.721+00:002013-03-19T20:27:48.721+00:00Thanks for the reply - glad you liked Eurydice'...Thanks for the reply - glad you liked Eurydice's appearance.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-28394672084715346592013-03-19T20:27:07.236+00:002013-03-19T20:27:07.236+00:00Thank you! So glad you do.Thank you! So glad you do.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17094349723028487644noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-47763718878777955302013-03-19T19:26:52.634+00:002013-03-19T19:26:52.634+00:00Ah! Well done. I was thinking she was the Grim Rea...Ah! Well done. I was thinking she was the Grim Reaper, but Eurydice is so much more interesting. This was well crafted and definitely had a modern myth feel too it, especially the bar full of solitary drinkers. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3565386894395739369.post-9961459457820569442013-03-19T13:03:44.789+00:002013-03-19T13:03:44.789+00:00Like!!!Like!!!Lyssa Medanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07350926829113722058noreply@blogger.com